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Formal Academic Writing - Part 2
Contents

Part 1

How do I choose the right academic level?
What does formal writing look like?

Part 2

How can I tell the difference between formal and informal styles of writing?
Links to further information

 
HOW CAN I TELL THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN FORMAL AND INFORMAL STYLES OF WRITING?

The following passages are both about the Melbourne Cup: one is written in formal English and one in an informal style.   
 

1. There's no doubt about it, the Melbourne Cup is the social event of the year.  For Cupgoers, it’s the day when the ladies turn up in all their finery.  A hat is a ‘must’, I might add.  Of course there’s always the ‘way out’ crowd with their crazy headgear and outlandish gear.  Everyone has a really great time.

 
2. The Melbourne Cup is widely accepted as a social phenomenon in Australia.  It would appear to be an unwritten rule that the ladies attending wear their best clothing or choose bizarre costumes; a hat is mandatory.  The cup is an event to be enjoyed.  It is also a time of great opportunity for those dealing in professional wagers.

Activity

Now, can you find examples of

Formal features in Passage 2

1. a tentative statement? 

2. a word with a precise meaning?

3. impersonal writing?

Informal features in Passage 1

4. a colloquial expression?

5. a cliché?

6. a personal opinion? 

 
FOR FURTHER INFORMATION TRY THIS LINK

"Features of academic writing" from Using English for Academic Purposes : A Guide for International Students by Andy Gillett
  
This guide developed by Helen Corben, North Coast Institute © TAFE NSW, North Coast Institute